Coincidence in Stories

Coincidence in Christmas in the film July
Coincidence is used adroitly in Preston Sturges’s 1940 comedy film.

Coincidence and how to use it effectively in stories.

Can a story contain a convenient coincidence without being deemed lazy and weak? After all, Charles Dickens’s work abounds with such narrative devices. I believe the answer is yes, but only if it is limited to one per story and is carefully woven into the structure of the tale.

Although life is riddled with what appears to be magnificent coincidences—the meeting of one’s future spouse by chance, the winning of a grand prize, the procurement of a lucrative job based on an impromptu internet search—stories are a different sort of animal.

In a story, the reader or audience expects material, especially coincidence, to be adroitly planned and crafted. Casual, haphazard coincidences are viewed for what they are: lazy writing. 

California University’s (Los Angeles) screenwriting graduate program chairman, Professor Richard Walter, too, is of the opinion that coincidence can work if the writer makes it important enough—such as having it launch or end the story, or form part of a main structural event, such as the inciting incident or turning point. 

In Preston Sturges’s Christmas in July, for example, well-intentioned pals fool a friend into believing that he has won a contest. In the end, it turns out that he actually has won the contest. Why does such a coincidence work? Partly because it is the only one in the film, and partly because it spins on a deliciously crafted irony.

In The China Syndrome, Jane Fonda and cameraman Michael Douglas, happen to be filming a story at a nuclear station. Something malfunctions at the plant and they record the incident. Here the coincidence is not offensive. 

Imagine, however, if, in seeking to add twists and turns to the tale, the writer had introduced a scene in which the footage was lost or destroyed. The crew then returned to shoot more material, when, lo and behold, another nuclear mishap occurred! Audiences would be outraged. What worked the first time around would not work again because such a coincidence would be unimaginative and repetitive. 

Summary

A single coincidence works best early or late in a story, runs on irony or surprise, and forms part of a major structural event such as the inciting incident or the first or second turning point.

1 thought on “Coincidence in Stories

  1. Gerhard Pistorius

    A fascinating article. I believe that coincidence should focus on plot and not motive. Zack Snyder’s Batman v Superman is a textbook example of lazy writing . Bruce Wayne believes that the chaos in the world following the events of Man of Steel is credited to Superman and his controversial image as a false God. Bruce becomes motivated to destroy Superman only to change his mind when it is revealed that Superman’s mother has the same name as Martha Wayne . A single coincidence in the story that does not effect the plot. It should not matter that Batman’s and Superman’s mothers have the same names – It has nothing to do with Lux Luther and his plans to turn the two heroes against each other. In the land Below the hero and the character Paulie share a common interest in the same girl. It’s no coincidence that Paulie and the hero must face justice after braking the law – they are in love with the same girl.

    In short : The coincidence must contribute to the plot of the film.

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